My Pitch
Plot:
A group of teenagers get lost in a woods when they approach an old house, thinking that the house is abandoned they attempt to enter. On entry they encounter a man running down the stairs and out of a window on the other side of the house to them. Before proceeding to find out what the man was running from the jock goes forward first to check if the house was safe. Finding nothing the group go upstairs, finding a locked room which they soon discover what the man was running from.
A group of teenagers get lost in a woods when they approach an old house, thinking that the house is abandoned they attempt to enter. On entry they encounter a man running down the stairs and out of a window on the other side of the house to them. Before proceeding to find out what the man was running from the jock goes forward first to check if the house was safe. Finding nothing the group go upstairs, finding a locked room which they soon discover what the man was running from.
Characters:
Stereotypical teenage group:
Stereotypical teenage group:
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Jock
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Princess
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Geek
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Weird
one (basket case)
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Criminal
Mysterious guy:
much older-looking man from the teenagers.
Structure:
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The
teens see the house from a distance in the woods.
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Approaching
making jokes about the house, what’s possibly inside.
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Getting
up to the house, more cautious.
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Entering
the house, the man runs out, tone changes.
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Jock
goes ahead leaving the group near the door that they entered.
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Jock
comes back finding nothing.
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The
group go upstairs again, making jokes but all clearly nervous.
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Geek
notices locked door.
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Criminal
knocks door through and we see shock on all other character’s faces.
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